Genndy Oda C.O.G. wrote:And, thanks to Mother Nature, I am back with Eli's card!
EDIT: As well as Pyro's:
Genndy Oda C.O.G. wrote:I am on a roll, it seems. Here is S_o_S's card:
Pixelmage wrote:Ok... Time for a review. My phrase is wrong. It should be "Phasma Observator"
"Demanes" does not mean Ghost, and out of all the words that actually translate to Ghost, Phasma is the one that sounds more fluid in the sentence. I'm not sure at all about latin grammar, just sound. xD
Ok, that fixed... The back of the cards. Will you make them all red? I would say make the back to be the same color as the Tonus. Just a suggestion though, if you make all red it's still cool.
And lastly, the 'T' before Pixelmage. (Also Capitalization if that's a thing to consider, though I notice that your card is not capitalized either, mentioning just in case it's an oversight.)
Sorry for being annoying.
H22 wrote:[needless pedantry] Phasmarum Observator. Or phasmae, depending on the number of ghosts. [/needless pedantry]


Pixelmage wrote:So, taking that my key is "Ghost Observer", singular. The accurate form would be "Phasmae Observator"?

AMimsyBorogove wrote:The last one's "adjective" is just the name of a legendary place. You don't need to translate "Hourai." In fact, "Phoenix" in Latin would still be "Phoenix," wouldn't it?
So basically, my title is too awesome to be translated. Or something.
Genndy Oda C.O.G. wrote:Well then, since all of you are such masters of the Latin language, here's the rest. Try to make better sense of them than I did.
- Empty Promise
- Sarcastic Mage
- Unfocused Scholar
- Destructive Blade
- Mirrored Image
- Burning Cowboy
- Paranoid Duck
- Passive Watcher
- Appropriately Crazy
- Sorcerer's Apprentice
- Quiet Dabbler
- Hourai Phoenix
narrativedilettante wrote:Genndy Oda C.O.G. wrote:Well then, since all of you are such masters of the Latin language, here's the rest. Try to make better sense of them than I did.
- Empty Promise
- Sarcastic Mage
- Unfocused Scholar
- Destructive Blade
- Mirrored Image
- Burning Cowboy
- Paranoid Duck
- Passive Watcher
- Appropriately Crazy
- Sorcerer's Apprentice
- Quiet Dabbler
- Hourai Phoenix
I'll see if I can come up with reasonable translations for these. My memory isn't too great with this stuff, and most of these words are not ones that come up in standard Latin classes (for example, they didn't have cowboys in ancient Rome). Also my Latin dictionary is at my parents' house. But I'll give it a go, and maybe together with some of the other people who've studied Latin we can arrive at reasonable equivalences.

Tohrinha wrote:Here's what I came up with. Listed "noun adjective", as in the beta profile cards.I'm pretty sure there's a better word than "otiosus" for "passive", but I can't find it.
- Empty Promise - Promissum Inanis
- Sarcastic Mage - Magus Acerbus
- Unfocused Scholar - Scholaris Dubius
- Destructive Blade - Lamina Exitialis
- Mirrored Image - Imago Imitata
- Burning Cowboy - Armentarius Ardens
- Paranoid Duck - Anas Suspicax
- Passive Watcher - Spectator Otiosus
- Appropriately Crazy - Insanus Apte
- Sorcerer's Apprentice - Discipulus Venefici
- Hourai Phoenix - Phoenix Hourai
Also, "insana" is another translation for "paranoid" that I found.If you like that better and want another term for "Appropriately Crazy", "vesanus" is also a translation for "crazy".
Tohrinha wrote:Also, "insana" is another translation for "paranoid" that I found.If you like that better and want another term for "Appropriately Crazy", "vesanus" is also a translation for "crazy".
H22 wrote:Well...... To expand these......
Promise which is empty
Promissio vacuus, I think.
Sarcastic Mage
Magus acerbus
Unfocused Scholar
Scholaris ?
Destructive Blade
Lamina facit occidere*
Mirrored Image
Specularis Imago
Burning Cowboy
Puer Bovinum Ex Infernis
More later, sorry.
*Lit. Blade used to kill.
** Boy of Cows from Fires***
***I know it's contrived****
****Nested!!!!

H22 wrote:-Renegade Intellect

Rick Healey wrote:One day, I ought to get my own pactio card made. I mean, I already know what it consists of:
Name: Richard Healey
Cognomen: Coquendam venatus dominus
Number: XXXII
Tonus: Negrer et Lutenum
Astralitas: Luna
Virtus: Caritas
Directio: Occidens
Least, that's how I think I'd be rendered. I'm not the one actually making the card, after all.

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