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Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 5:34 pm**

*rereads song to figure out where the swearing is*
*gives up*

tbh, there is ONE word in there that I probably wouldn't normally say, but it's tame enough that it's the kind of thing I don't mind making an exception about for my Art. but with elephants.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 5:55 pm**

As far as I can tell, the only word is "screwed", and I don't really consider that to be swearing, so.....with elephants.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:02 pm**

The words I was referring to are Line 27, word 3; Line 37, word 3; and Line 57, word 3. I'm fine with using the word "screwed." It doesn't make a significant difference though, as I doubt I'll be singing those lines.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:07 pm**

Genndy Oda C.O.G. wrote:The words I was referring to are Line 27, word 3; Line 37, word 3; and Line 57, word 3. I'm fine with using the word "screwed." It doesn't make a significant difference though, as I doubt I'll be singing those lines.

Uh... I can't find what you meant...

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:08 pm**

Fine. The final resting place of sinners, and a misbehaving donkey.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:11 pm**

Genndy Oda C.O.G. wrote:Fine. The final resting place of sinners, and a misbehaving donkey.

I see it now. So IRL Gosh, Dang It to Heck applies to you?

Just like me!

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:32 pm**

http://www.sendspace.com/file/l7ytd9 - The main song, sung by me. I ignored the "The Wall Won't Fall" chants, and any individual line that I don't sing, though I don't think I did it all that well. Both will be uploaded shortly, to complete the ensemble.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:36 pm**

Ah, if only I knew how to put audio files on the internet. I've even got a microphone headset, I just don't know what to do with it.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:38 pm**

I was just planning to put my piece on my YouTube channel, and call it a cover of the song.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:43 pm**

The song for the ("The Wall Won't Fall") repeated chant (two instances, so pick and choose). http://www.sendspace.com/file/1gyg9t

My individual line (it's not really in tune, but it doesn't fit the beat of the original anyway. http://www.sendspace.com/file/cgwr8s

My contributions are done!

Endless Sea wrote:Ah, if only I knew how to put audio files on the internet. I've even got a microphone headset, I just don't know what to do with it.

Just use Sendspace, like I did.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:54 pm**

Edited the original post to add

Clarification in case anybody needs it:
Each of us who wishes to do so sings the WHOLE song. Use headphones so that the recording does not pick up on the background music as we already have that as a separate file.
If you need to listen as you sing, you can find the song with vocals here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jbp52Z9jRg0
And without here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UhICDbRKz-E

Krika wrote:The song for the ("The Wall Won't Fall") repeated chant (two instances, so pick and choose). http://www.sendspace.com/file/1gyg9t
My individual line (it's not really in tune, but it doesn't fit the beat of the original anyway. http://www.sendspace.com/file/cgwr8s
My contributions are done!

Perfect, Kirka

Feel free to do the whole song too if you want

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 7:06 pm**

Genndy Oda C.O.G. wrote:I was just planning to put my piece on my YouTube channel, and call it a cover of the song.

Which would also be it's own share of awesome

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 7:32 pm**

Scarab wrote:
Perfect, Kirka Feel free to do the whole song too if you want

Errr....

Krika wrote:http://www.sendspace.com/file/l7ytd9 - The main song, sung by me. I ignored the "The Wall Won't Fall" chants, and any individual line that I don't sing, though I don't think I did it all that well. Both will be uploaded shortly, to complete the ensemble.

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 7:35 pm**

Krika wrote:Errr....

Krika wrote:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/l7ytd9 - The main song, sung by me. I ignored the "The Wall Won't Fall" chants, and any individual line that I don't sing, though I don't think I did it all that well. Both will be uploaded shortly, to complete the ensemble.

...I saw that. Yeah. Totally. :oops:

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:21 pm**

I have a suggestion for a slight lyrics change (which I feel bad about, given that people have already started recording).

For "HEED MY EVERY ORDER" could we maybe say "HEED OUR EVERY ORDER" because, from what I can tell, that's meant to be Mr. A speaking?

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:34 pm**

narrativedilettante wrote:I have a suggestion for a slight lyrics change (which I feel bad about, given that people have already started recording).

For "HEED MY EVERY ORDER" could we maybe say "HEED OUR EVERY ORDER" because, from what I can tell, that's meant to be Mr. A speaking?

This is a good point

*goes to make the change*

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:36 pm**

....Dammit, do I have to re-record that bit?

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:38 pm**

Krika wrote:....Dammit, do I have to re-record that bit?

Don't worry about it

it's not the chorus, so we'll let you know if we want you to do that particular line in which case THEN you can rerecord it. Don't give yourself more work until you're sure it's needed

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:57 pm**

Don’t know whom to follow,
'tween Ed and Joe
but don’t ever think we’re through

I'm really having trouble figuring out how to line this up with the line from the actual song:

You're unsuited for
the rage of war
So pack up, go home
you're through.

I think the Don't know whom to follow, 'tween Ed and Joe part that is tripping me up

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:11 pm**

Qara-Xuan-Zenith wrote:Emphasis should be like this: "Don't KNOW whom to follow 'tween ED and Joe"

Hope that helps, though I do think it is kind of a stretch... Kind of hard to sing that part >.<

Posted: **Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:29 pm**

Blurred_9L wrote:
Qara-Xuan-Zenith wrote:Emphasis should be like this: "Don't KNOW whom to follow 'tween ED and Joe"

Hope that helps, though I do think it is kind of a stretch... Kind of hard to sing that part >.<

Yeah, what Blurred said, the 'don't know who' are the 'you're not suit'in the original song. )I keep forgetting you guys don't all have the same pronunciation as me.)

If it's tough to sing, you're qwelcome to try and thing of better ways to reword it.

Posted: **Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:21 am**

You're right; I put too many syllables in that line, and while it's POSSIBLE to fit it, it's annoying.

How about

"Don't know whom to choose, 'tween Ed and Joe"

Posted: **Thu Dec 06, 2012 2:54 am**

we need to move up the timeline https://twitter.com/YouHaveFailedUs/sta ... 4225190912

Posted: **Thu Dec 06, 2012 10:12 am**

I'll record it as soon as I'm alone.

Posted: **Thu Dec 06, 2012 11:14 am**

It's coming to a head
'Tween Joe and Ed...

Leaning to and fro
'Tween Ed and Joe...

Hoping to be led
By both Joe and Ed...

Some ideas. *shrug*

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