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Sicon112 wrote:Uh oh... here it comes! Clocking in at... HOLY SH*T IT'S ALMOST FOUR THOUSAAAAAAAAAND!

Yeah... finding Marisa images that fit what I have in mind is a little hard. Sorry about any typos or such you might find in the post, btw. I didn't have time to go over it, so that's just a first draft. Sicon kept pressuring me to put it up because I was taking too long. I MIGHT have had a little two much fun with that.

Okay, that's it. I want to be awesome too. Depending on the direction this is taking, I will PM. I'm planning a big scene in my mind, I hope I can put it in use.
Also, since Sabrac is in the middle of the room, and he will take down the last enemies, well, I had this small plot development I wanted to use anyways. Better for me.

That was...ridiculous. Why did I bring you into this again? What the hell was I thinking?

OK who is ready for my insanity!?

Sorry. I just couldn't help myself! Let this be a lesson to you: Never leave the freaking TOUHOU CHARACTER to deal with 15 targets and NOT expect something that is both completely ridiculous, and completely awesome.

I loved that little Pre-Mortem One Liner at the end, though. Found a way to work her catchphrase and title into the whole thing after all.

*reads the post, takes up a random piece of paper, and slowly tears and eats it bit by bit*
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*after seeing some of the writing on it* Ah, dammit, your awesomeness made me eat my English paper...

OK, if everyone is done reading the really far too long post, I can post mine up at any time. Want it now?

Sicon112 wrote:OK who is ready for my insanity!?

Wait! The BGM is loading!

Okay just fyi after siccon goes I am adding the next bit of story.

Lordxana0 wrote:Okay just fyi after siccon goes I am adding the next bit of story.

If everyone has read my brother's post, I can go now. Should I?

Go on. Let's see what more you have to offer of the Great and Powerful Trix- *cough* I mean, Sabrac!

IslaKariese wrote:Go on. Let's see what more you have to offer of the Great and Powerful Trix- *cough* I mean, Sabrac!

Done. Be in awe of Sabrac and his awesome.

Sicon112 wrote:

Lordxana0 wrote:Okay just fyi after siccon goes I am adding the next bit of story.

If everyone has read my brother's post, I can go now. Should I?

If there are still monsters yes. Finish them

Lordxana0 wrote:

Sicon112 wrote:

Lordxana0 wrote:Okay just fyi after siccon goes I am adding the next bit of story.

If everyone has read my brother's post, I can go now. Should I?

If there are still monsters yes. Finish them

FATALITY. Trust me, I already did.

I took some time to read because I ended up doing some other stuff while that. But it kinda bothers me that my character just standed thare watching Marisa. Well... Maybe he was too impressed to do something.
3 s of 3

*coughs up her English paper... then starts eating it again, eyes wide*

Okay now everybody wait for me to GM post before continuing.

IslaKariese wrote:*coughs up her English paper... then starts eating it again, eyes wide*

THAT was the first time I've truly gotten Sabrac's character down. What do you think?

I made sure not to mention what he was doing, but fridge logic is that if he tried doing something in the first part, the Non-Directional Laser probably would have kept him back until Marisa had already moved on, and if he jumped into the fight between Marisa and the fourth knight, it probably would have just gotten in her way, or forced her to retreat hastily as he began his attack, probably ending up forcing her into one of the knight's attacks, which after she protected your char, I don't think he'd want to happen anymore. Either that, or the first Sabracsplosion when he started fighting the knights as well might have distracted your char and kept him from reaching the fight. Besides, although the duel at the end dragged on for a while text-wise, it was really, really short in-universe time, since both of them were moving and fighting at pretty ridiculous speeds. Marisa, like the knights, is a Lightning Bruiser after all. By the time he crossed the distance to help her, it might just have been over.

Also, does everyone approve of our music choice? Should we keep doing that?

EDIT: 1337 posts. ^_^

Sicon112 wrote:Also, does everyone approve of our music choice? Should we keep doing that?

Honestly, I'm too busy with the text itself to worry about BGM. *swallows the last of her paper* 'Cause honestly, holy fuck.

*Edit* Yeah, okay, Leet-Boi.

IslaKariese wrote:

Sicon112 wrote:Also, does everyone approve of our music choice? Should we keep doing that?

Honestly, I'm too busy with the text itself to worry about BGM. *swallows the last of her paper* 'Cause honestly, holy fuck.

You... you didn't listen to them while reading?

Sicon112 wrote:You... you didn't listen to them while reading?

*blinks, sighs, goes back to read while listening to the music*

IslaKariese wrote:

Sicon112 wrote:Also, does everyone approve of our music choice? Should we keep doing that?

Honestly, I'm too busy with the text itself to worry about BGM. *swallows the last of her paper* 'Cause honestly, holy fuck.

*Edit* Yeah, okay, Leet-Boi.

Also, it's not like we are that much better than you at writing. We just happen to be rather long winded.