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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Adell on Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:52 pm

eli_gone_crazy wrote:If its too long I'm skimming.


I'm with on this one, lol. There is such a thing as TOO MUCH.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Pixelmage on Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:55 pm

Sicon112 wrote:
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eli_gone_crazy wrote:If its too long I'm skimming.

Oh... Not you, you're not skimming. You were the first to call "Mimsy joins" a few pages back, it'll be an insult to him if you don't read his post and comment on it. With details! :twisted:

Actually, you will WANT to read it because he makes it pretty damn awesome. Anyhow, I say just leave never's old character out of it. No one ever ran into him or anything, and we already HAVE dead guys to lead into our first mission. Remember Xana's intro post?

Sicon! Don't spoil the fun! I wanted Eli to dread the moment of reading, so that the awesomeness came as a surprise! :(

Also, what I meant as a dead body was more of a fresh dead body. As in killed on screen just to shake some fear of the dark into our parnoid character's heads. :) That he was a Psychic is all the best: One of the main attack forces insta-killed. Sure scares any would-be hero.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Sicon112 on Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:56 pm

Eeeh, I don't think it's worth the trouble, but I suppose if Xana really wants to...
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby eli_gone_crazy on Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:57 pm

Pixelmage wrote:
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Pixelmage wrote:Oh... Not you, you're not skimming. You were the first to call "Mimsy joins" a few pages back, it'll be an insult to him if you don't read his post and comment on it. With details! :twisted:

Actually, you will WANT to read it because he makes it pretty damn awesome. Anyhow, I say just leave never's old character out of it. No one ever ran into him or anything, and we already HAVE dead guys to lead into our first mission. Remember Xana's intro post?

Sicon! Don't spoil the fun! I wanted Eli to dread the moment of reading, so that the awesomeness came as a surprise! :(

Also, what I meant as a dead body was more of a fresh dead body. As in killed on screen just to shake some fear of the dark into our parnoid character's heads. :) That he was a Psychic is all the best: One of the main attack forces insta-killed. Sure scares any would-be hero.


oh trust me, wall of text makes me more paranoid than any dead bodies X_X
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Pixelmage on Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:01 pm

Oh well... Shame I won't be here to read it now. I know what's coming and my turn is not anytime soon... Since it's 1AM down here in the Raniforest (I don't live near the Rainforest) I'll just go to sleep and wake to read the awesomeness!

See ya people. ;)
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Sicon112 on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:16 am

And with that...let the fun begin. :twisted:
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby agoraoptera on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:33 am

I don't know, Mimsy's character seems a bit too badass for a horror RP. It wouldn't be scary if he just outright murders every Freak we come across..
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Sicon112 on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:41 am

agoraoptera wrote:I don't know, Mimsy's character seems a bit too badass for a horror RP. It wouldn't be scary if he just outright murders every Freak we come across..


I don't think he is that good, actually. That was a super weak freak, probably the weakest that will ever appear in this RP, and it still took a full clip of ammo from his friggin' HUGE revolver to kill it. If there were even TWO freaks there, he probably would have at least been pretty badly hurt, and if it had actually been capable of mental assaults, he would have been in deep sh*t. None of us are gonna be worth anything all by ourselves. Xana did a really good job of setting up the class system to make it that way.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Lordxana0 on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:42 am

First part posted. Sneak peek of what you guys will be going after.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Sicon112 on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:46 am

Lordxana0 wrote:First part posted. Sneak peek of what you guys will be going after.


Sweet. My next post will be rather long as well (Not as long as this one, probably.) because I need to follow up on events shortly after I reach London and get those files from The Order. I purposely made it so my guy was actually contacted earlier than most of the others, because The Order knew just how stubborn and paranoid he is. They wanted extra time to get him to join, so I have a free day that the timeskip passes. I'll just flash back to the end of my first Crazy Prepared gambit and then head on into the house.

Please note: None of my character's gambits, including this one, are going to end the way he wants them to. Some of them will work, sure, but there will be many issues and setbacks along the way. Since this is a more gritty RP, I'm going for more realism.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Scarab on Fri Oct 26, 2012 5:58 am

Would you guys mind too badly if I attempted an audio recording of all this? I mean my accent isn't going to do any of you Americans any favours, but...
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Dryunya on Fri Oct 26, 2012 6:12 am

Ok. I read through Mimsy's post. It's well-written, but feels... unrelated. :? Like a detailed description of the hunt, "and then they called him to a new mission and he agreed". Not really my business, though.

Sicon's character. Alister. Sweetie. He's my fucking hero. If I knew him in advance, I'd pick a female character just so that I could have his babies in the epilogue. :D (No homo. ;) ) He deserves a story fully dedicated to his shenanigans.

God he's so awesome.

Ok, I'm done. A more urgent question: how are we to implement the characters' interactions? I haven't done this before. If we are to write a passage from our character's POV, we may wreck other people's characters. If we only write our characters' actions, the thread will look more like a chat (not a bad thing, but would be tedious to follow). So?

Also, re: discussion about the characters' survival rate... I didn't really design my character with survival rates in mind. This is gonna suck. :shock:

Damn, he's so awesome it's unbelievable...
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Zup on Fri Oct 26, 2012 6:18 am

Scarab wrote:Would you guys mind too badly if I attempted an audio recording of all this? I mean my accent isn't going to do any of you Americans any favours, but...


With your voice, I would prefer an audio recording.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby agoraoptera on Fri Oct 26, 2012 6:49 am

Dryunya wrote:Also, re: discussion about the characters' survival rate... I didn't really design my character with survival rates in mind. This is gonna suck. :shock:

I designed mine with the idea that we're all gonna get maimed horribly and possibly even die. So yes, I had survival rate in mind. Just not in a good way.
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Scarab wrote:Would you guys mind too badly if I attempted an audio recording of all this? I mean my accent isn't going to do any of you Americans any favours, but...


With your voice, I would prefer an audio recording.

Never heard your voice but go ahead! My sister has a British boyfriend, I can deal with accents :D
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Scarab on Fri Oct 26, 2012 7:12 am

agoraoptera wrote:With your voice, I would prefer an audio recording.
Never heard your voice but go ahead! My sister has a British boyfriend, I can deal with accents


Just cause I sound half decent when I sing doesn't mean I sound okay when I talk, but I won't know until I try :). Either way you all get to hear hear my attempt at an American accent.

agoraoptera wrote:I designed mine with the idea that we're all gonna get maimed horribly and possibly even die. So yes, I had survival rate in mind. Just not in a good way.
*coughallgonnadiecough*

I knowthe feeling although apparantly being young and female gives my character an increased chance of survival... or something.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Sicon112 on Fri Oct 26, 2012 7:56 am

Scarab wrote:
agoraoptera wrote:With your voice, I would prefer an audio recording.
Never heard your voice but go ahead! My sister has a British boyfriend, I can deal with accents


Just cause I sound half decent when I sing doesn't mean I sound okay when I talk, but I won't know until I try :). Either way you all get to hear hear my attempt at an American accent.


Don't worry, British accents don't bother me a bit. I hear a lot of them, actually. Dunno why, but I keep running across brits on the internet. It's gotten to the point that I actually slip into vaguely British accents in the middle of sentences every now and then, and that has happened so much that the rest of my family has started doing it too. It's funny that this comes up because just the other day a friend of the family was laughing at us for all slipping into British accents in the middle of a conversation...

Dryunya wrote:Sicon's character. Alister. Sweetie. He's my fucking hero. If I knew him in advance, I'd pick a female character just so that I could have his babies in the epilogue. :D (No homo. ;) ) He deserves a story fully dedicated to his shenanigans.

God he's so awesome.

Ok, I'm done. A more urgent question: how are we to implement the characters' interactions? I haven't done this before. If we are to write a passage from our character's POV, we may wreck other people's characters. If we only write our characters' actions, the thread will look more like a chat (not a bad thing, but would be tedious to follow). So?

Also, re: discussion about the characters' survival rate... I didn't really design my character with survival rates in mind. This is gonna suck. :shock:

Damn, he's so awesome it's unbelievable...


If I'm being totally honest, Dryu, I took one look at this RP and two words popped into my head. Those two words were the core of Alister's character. Those two words happen to also be "Crazy Awesome". I'm glad I succeeded, but the shenanigans are not done yet! Just wait and see what he does once he touches down in London!

As to character interaction, this can go one of two ways. The first is open ended interaction. Person A makes a post where they ask a question to the other characters, such asking for their names or something. The other characters lower in the post order come in and answer the question in each of their posts. However, this is not conductive to conversations, and you always have to be careful that you do not force someone into doing something. (i.e. In the upcoming turn, you direct a comment to me, but I wanted to come in late and our posts form a contradiction.)

The second method is to PM plans back and forth, with the poster writing up stuff and sending it to the addressed character for their reactions or similar things. This makes conversations much nicer and makes the scene flow better, but it can sometimes be bothersome to set up. I'm always willing to do posts like that if it fits with my own posts, but sometimes other people may not want to.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Sicon112 on Fri Oct 26, 2012 8:58 am

Oh, by the way, Dryu, do you still think it's a bad thing that Alister is crazy? :D
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Pixelmage on Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:26 am

Well. Mimsy is a non-crazy badass. You know what Horror Tropes dictate, don't you? ;)

Scarab. Record it! And don't force your accent. Just speak naturally, forced accents are way harder to understand than natural speak and this comes from one who has english as a second language, trust me. ;)
Also, your character is British! If she doesn't speak in a British accent it will hurt realism and suspension of disbelief.

On conversations: Anyone can PM me for it at any time. I'm always up for combination posts like this. :D
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Sicon112 on Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:30 am

Well, if I understand him, Dryu is criticizing Mimsy because he spent so much time on the hunt and not a lot on getting the call. I think the reason he did that is the same reason I made my post the way it is. He wanted to use this chance to let people get a good idea of his character. He just did it in his own way instead of reacting to the message like I did.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Dryunya on Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:32 am

Sicon112 wrote:Oh, by the way, Dryu, do you still think it's a bad thing that Alister is crazy? :D

I never said I did! :roll:
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Victin on Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:29 am

Why is the Character Sheet stickied?
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Pixelmage on Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:36 am

Victin wrote:Why is the Character Sheet stickied?

Adell merged both sheets and stickied it at Sicon's request.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Victin on Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:39 am

Pixelmage wrote:
Victin wrote:Why is the Character Sheet stickied?

Adell merged both sheets and stickied it at Sicon's request.

I didn't see our RPG sheets. I was starting to feel envy.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Zup on Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:58 pm

Not to be the party pooper, but I do want to point out that unneccesarily long RP posts will end up being frustrating rather than exciting. I'm already tempted to skip/skim some of what you guys have wrote due to tl:dr. Basically, you don't need that much space to say something. Be conscious of your readers, and edit, edit, edit. As they said in my creative writing class, sometimes you have to murder your darlings.
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Re: Black Knight sign up and discussion.

Postby Dryunya on Fri Oct 26, 2012 3:47 pm

Btw, Xana, you may want to edit the OP in the RPG thread to include recent changes.
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