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Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 12, 2013 1:34 amby IslaKariese
Meh, I can live with nitpicks. I already know that I kinda suck with clothes, mainly with texture and the like. But I never turn down constructive criticism. As for the fox features, I think it's mainly the line I have making the tip of the tail a different color. I intended it to be blonde bleeding into red like her hair would be, but meh. In line art, it doesn't come across very well.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 12, 2013 11:50 amby IslaKariese
Okay, I made some major improvements on the skirt. That had been bugging me all last night.
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Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 12, 2013 4:48 pmby AMimsyBorogove
Eh, I was just making a Rena Ryuugu reference, TBH. I think it's a nice picture. ^^
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 12, 2013 5:02 pmby IslaKariese
Okay, last pic relating to Lori. Did some erasing and fixed the skirt.
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I'll let the poor thing rest now, I'm probably spamming the forum with it anyway.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 12, 2013 5:21 pmby Pixelmage
Ok... I'll try to make an outline, possibly flat... With some miracle a properly shaded version of it once I'm a bit more free, if you don't me me trying. Can't promise it'll work out though... That would be the 3rd digital drawing from me. Ever. (First being a sketch to figure out what the tools did, second was the ches before). ._.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 12, 2013 5:29 pmby IslaKariese
Pixelmage wrote:Ok... I'll try to make an outline, possibly flat... With some miracle a properly shaded version of it once I'm a bit more free, if you don't me me trying. Can't promise it'll work out though... That would be the 3rd digital drawing from me. Ever. (First being a sketch to figure out what the tools did, second was the ches before). ._.
Hey, feel free to do you. I'm no champ at digital drawing either, unless I have Illustrator. And that's not as sophisticated as what I've seen done with Photoshop. But if you wanna redraw Lori, I can only say I'm looking forward to what you come up with.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 12, 2013 6:47 pmby AMimsyBorogove
If you redraw her, give her Rena Ryuugu's trademark hat. YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 12:35 pmby Scarab
IslaKariese wrote:I'll let the poor thing rest now, I'm probably spamming the forum with it anyway.
You could never spam with something that awesome (and I am going to be really really cheeky now and ask you if I may please colour it very quickly, when I have some time?)
Alice has posted. It's mostly exposition, buy Guyshane can respond if he wants to. Yes, Alice just performed a blood transfusion via hugging and Guyshane may not be able to remove that Rose: just let it die naturally and it'll fall off
. I am pretty sure the rules of human biology don't apply to Underlanders, but I made Akahana a Universal Donor type just on the one in a million off chance that the blood type thing is a problem.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:15 pmby Sicon112
Here is a question: Should I still be waiting for Isla, or did she not want to post here? Lawrence and the rest really ought to get out of that burning building, so if Isla doesn't intend to post, I guess I'll just continue.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:15 pmby Scarab
Sicon112 wrote:Here is a question: Should I still be waiting for Isla, or did she not want to post here? Lawrence and the rest really ought to get out of that burning building, so if Isla doesn't intend to post, I guess I'll just continue.
I don't think it'll make any difference which of you posts here, so you can probably go right ahead and post now.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:19 pmby Sicon112
Except if I post, that just means she sits there doing nothing, taking away a chance for her to be part of the scene. Unless she really doesn't want to post, I don't want to do that.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:39 pmby IslaKariese
@Sicon: Gimme a moment, I'll go ahead and write a reaction post.
@Scarab: Go ahead! With my Illustrator as bugged out as it is, I can't use it, so coloring and improving is up to all of you. I give you free reign. *bows to superior talent*
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:43 pmby Sicon112
Awesome. I'll keep an eye out for it.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 13, 2013 2:19 pmby IslaKariese
New post, fresh from the oven.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Thu Mar 14, 2013 1:21 amby Guyshane
Did I mention Shane is a shameless flirt when he gets a good opportunity?
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Thu Mar 14, 2013 2:24 pmby Qara-Xuan Zenith
My profuse thanks to Mimsy for letting me know what Crazy Hat-dude is doing.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:07 pmby Scarab
Guyshane wrote:Did I mention Shane is a shameless flirt when he gets a good opportunity?
Did I mention that Akahana is kind of the exact opposite of a flirt and is going to spend the next few days steadfastly avoiding his gaze?
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:13 pmby Guyshane
Scarab wrote:Guyshane wrote:Did I mention Shane is a shameless flirt when he gets a good opportunity?
Did I mention that Akahana is kind of the exact opposite of a flirt and is going to spend the next few days steadfastly avoiding his gaze?
That only makes it more fun for me to write, besides just because Akahana is doesn't mean that Alice is
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:42 pmby Scarab
Guyshane wrote:Scarab wrote:Guyshane wrote:Did I mention Shane is a shameless flirt when he gets a good opportunity?
Did I mention that Akahana is kind of the exact opposite of a flirt and is going to spend the next few days steadfastly avoiding his gaze?
That only makes it more fun for me to write, besides just because Akahana is doesn't mean that Alice is
Oh,
Alice likes him already.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 19, 2013 7:39 amby Scarab
Yeah are we needing another Alice post here? I don't want to get in the way if anyone has plans.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:00 pmby AMimsyBorogove
Posted. Sorry for taking some small liberties with your character, Qara. I've recently started watching Durarara!! you see, and the Shizuo Heiwajima references were far too apt to pass up, especially considering that he has the same English VA as Jeremiah Gottwald. =P
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:08 pmby IslaKariese
AMimsyBorogove wrote:...a demure, stoic girl he had seen a few times, but never really interacted with - aside from asking to borrow her lunch, as was his custom, and replacing it with an inexplicably tie-dyed rubber chicken wearing a tophat and a monocle when she refused.
...Why...?
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:46 pmby AMimsyBorogove
Do you really need to ask? Because the answer is kind of obvious.
It's because I can.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:15 pmby IslaKariese
AMimsyBorogove wrote:Do you really need to ask? Because the answer is kind of obvious.
It's because I can.
Well, I figured out that much. It was more of a rhetorical plea for the words to make sense.
Re: Chain Wars Discussion
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Wed Mar 20, 2013 3:00 amby Guyshane
IslaKariese wrote:AMimsyBorogove wrote:Do you really need to ask? Because the answer is kind of obvious.
It's because I can.
Well, I figured out that much. It was more of a rhetorical plea for the words to make sense.
If you were thinking 4th dimensionally it would make sense